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-. guardian angel .-

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Did you ever look up
Into the wideness of the sky
Your heart torn out
With bestial might
Desparingly screaming
For your Guardian Angel

'Where have you been,
You sweet feathery creature?'

'Where were you
When I needed you most?'

'Now my soul is dying
From pain
From loneliness
From coldness,
While you were out there
Ignoring my silent whine.'

'My loud scream,
When I noticed the cold fog
crawling up my legs.
It's not the pain which scares me,
It's the knowledge
Of being alone in moments
Of merciless slaughter.'

There are wounds even guardian angels cannot mend ...

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Material:
girl: Model Suse
man:worldgonedigital
background:stevesm-stock
brushes: pretty brushes
words: by me
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shystarkey's avatar
mmmm interesting I like the fact it sounds ethereal and I got an image in my head of a mystical and an enchanted forest as I was reading this but In my opinion I feel that you need to use more descriptive words so don't be afraid to go out your comfort zone by adding in fancier words that would have made it even better, maybe you could infest in a dictionary